January posting meme: writing, the easy and the difficult

[hedda62]

enemyofperfect asked: What's a part of writing that comes easily to you, and what's one that's difficult? (Does it depend how ease and difficulty are defined?)

It's a good day to answer this (briefly) because I am writing, and therefore the easy and the difficult (which I think speak for themselves in definition, though there's a sliding scale) are laid out in front of me and tugging me in and out of the file.

Things I find relatively easy:

1) Stopping in the middle of a sentence for twenty minutes while I research something. Okay, that's a snippy answer, but I'm at ease with deciding when to research, how long to research for, what to look for, and how to use it when I go back to writing, which is not a small thing.

2) Usually, dialogue and character interaction. Voices in the broad sense and the narrow one.

3) Glomping on to metaphors and torturing them half to death.

4) Rhythm, sentence construction, word choice. Actually, those are all hard, but I enjoy doing them.

5) Editing. Well, easy-ish.

Things I find hard:

1) Plot, but I'm getting better all the time. Pacing, ditto.

2) Keeping a mental picture of all the characters on stage at once, and using them in active ways.

3) Remembering to put in the physical details that make writing pop. Smells, tastes, the way things feel when you rub your cheek against them.

4) Shitty first drafts.

5) Stopping when it's not going well.

And heh, you asked for one thing in each category, but limiting myself is something else I'm terrible at.

Comments

[eight_of_cups]

Re: shitty first drafts. I don't really do them either, at least not as one does NaNo, where you just put words on a page and call it progress, because that's just not how it works for me. I think it's largely that the shitty first draft is the one in my head -- handwaved plot points, overwrought dialogue, purple prose, rickety structure, amorphous characterization. The process of transferring that draft to the actual page is sort of a process of depixellation, in which the first thing to emerge is usually a volley of dialogue, which sometimes I'll jot on an index card for reference while I'm working toward it. My clutch of index cards is the only evidence I have of an alpha draft. What winds up on the page is a beta draft (because it goes to my betas! ha) and is reasonably coherent.

I admire very much your talent for rhythm and word choice -- your prose is fluent and evocative without being garish; it's delightful to read and enviable to contemplate. :)

[hedda62]

That is a very good way to put it, and I'm sure I do the same. The actual process of writing is the first stage of editing.